Setting

 

 

          The concept of “setting as character” is familiar to most of us, but accepting that it’s a good idea and being able to implement it are two very different things.  The summer I worked on my course on settings, I was in England, taking classes at Oxford, and finishing up with a holiday in Cornwall.  So, I chose to read books set in Oxford and Cornwall.

          One of the best books describing the Oxford of its period is again, Sayers’s Gaudy Night, 1935.  Another is, of course, Evelyn Waugh’s Brideshead Revisited, 1944, which paints a glorious picture of Oxford in the 1920s.  Mind you, the Oxford accommodations we saw had little in common with the luxurious rooms created by either Waugh or Sayers.  But the beautiful city, with its splendid architecture can’t be ruined, even though Cornmarket Street is lined with U.S. fast food outlets.

          As for mysteries set in Oxford, Antonia Fraser’s Oxford Blood, 1985, is in a sense, a 1980s sequel to Brideshead. Oxford Blood has some interesting twists, including its concept, but it also has some serious flaws—for example, the murderer is not exposed by the detection of the heroine, but only caught because he strikes again.  Fraser’s settings – the Oxford of a “golden lad,” Viscount Saffron – are as opulent and richly decorated as those in Waugh’s Oxford.
 

 
 

         J.C. Masterman’s Oxford Tragedy is a successful mystery, and its settings are excellent:

Only a Philistine of the first water could fail to be impressed by the beauty of the dining-hall of St. Thomas’s.  The long tables and benches almost black with age, the lights on the tables which left the great space above dark and mysterious, the beautiful sixteenth-century roof, now only dimly seen, the rows of stately portraits along the walls; the high table where the silver showed white against the background of the bare oak table beneath it—all these made up a picture, which no amount of familiarity could ever make other than a marvel of beauty to my eyes.

And:

... there is no place more pleasant than Common Room, no hour more wholly pleasurable than that spent in it immediately after dinner.  For here the Fellows of St. Thomas’s, having dined, settled down to enjoy the comfort of port and dessert, of coffee and cigars.  I had come, as I grew older, to look forward all day to that hour in the evening which I most enjoyed.  The good wine, the flow of conversation, the ritual of the table at once dignified and almost stately and yet homely as well, exercised a soothing effect on my nerves and filled me with a sense of physical and mental well-being... life there suited itself to my every mood.  If I felt festive and sociable there were always others ready to meet me halfway.  If on the other hand a black shadow of pessimism was on me, the room seemed to attune itself to me.  I thought of it then as the home of a multitude of my predecessors—who had drunk their wine and lived their short lives there since the foundation of the college.

The narrator’s appreciation of his surroundings and the company he finds there is almost destroyed when he learns that one of his colleagues has been murdered, almost certainly by another of his colleagues.  The sharp contrast is very effective.

Despite the huge numbers of mysteries which have been set in Oxford, I didn’t find many I liked.  A number of them have what I think of as the “humor problem,” typified by Edmund Crispin’s The Moving Toyshop, 1946, which is more farce than mystery, and often downright silly.  Unfortunately, there are a number of Crispin-type novels that can’t make up their minds whether they’re a mystery, or a joke.  Stripped of all the waggery, dopey exclamations (“Oh my paws!), tedious repartee, chase scenes, nude bathing, etc., the plot of The Moving Toyshop is mildly interesting, although ruined by too many coincidences.  But Crispin’s descriptions of Oxford are beautiful:

Through a rift in the trees he caught his first real glimpse of Oxford—in that ineffectual moonlight, an underwater city, its towers and spires standing ghostly, like the memorials of lost Atlantis fathoms deep…in the quiet air he heard faintly a single bell beating one o’clock, the precursor of others which joined in brief phantom chime, like the bells of the sunken cathedral in Breton myths rocked momentarily by the green deep-water currents, and then silent.

And a little later:

Out of the grey light came a gold morning.  The leaves were beginning to fall from the trees in the Parks in St. Giles’, but they still made a brave show of bronze and yellow and malt-brown.  The grey maze of Oxford—from the air, it resembles nothing so much as a maze—began to stir itself…shops opened and buses ran; the streets were thronged with traffic.  All over the city, in college and belfries, the mechanism of clocks whirred, clanged and struck nine o’clock, in a maddening, jagged syncopation of conflicting tempo and timbre.

Because the book is so nonsensical, the exquisite settings seem discordant.  It’s as if two different authors wrote this book, one who devised the silly characters and flawed plot, and another who described Oxford.

          The Cornwall settings in the books I read are equally entrancing, and I found several Cornwall mysteries I liked.  Daphne Du Maurier’s Jamaica Inn, 1936, is not exactly a mystery, but all of us can learn from Du Maurier’s atmospheric settings:

She looked up at Jamaica Inn, sinister and grey in the approaching dusk, the windows barred; she thought of the horrors that the house had witnessed, the secrets now embedded in its walls and she turned away from it all, as one turns instinctively from a house of the dead. 

          Janie Bolimo’s Buried in Cornwall, 1999, is not entirely satisfactory as a mystery, but the description of the artists in the art colony at St. Ives is fascinating.  As for the setting:

Rose had to admit that [the village of St. Ives] was a beautiful place.  The sand was fine, the color of clotted cream, and the sea, beloved by surfers, was bluer than the Agean.  If you arrived by train the breathtaking view was framed by a fringe of palm trees.

          My favorite mystery set in Cornwall is Elizabeth George’s A Suitable Vengeance, 1991.  It’s also a wonderful “setting as character” novel:

It was a wild part of the country, comprising desolate moors, stony hillsides, sandy coves whose hidden caves had long been used as smuggler’s caches, sudden lush woodlands where the countryside dipped into a combe, and everywhere tangles of celandine, poppy and periwinkle that dominated the narrow lanes.

          Other interesting mysteries set in Cornwall that make good use of settings include Robert Goddard’s Days Without Number, 2003, which contains enough surprises, twists, and suspense to keep the most blasé mystery reader guessing, as well as expert uses of location and atmosphere to heighten the sense of impending doom.  Goddard’s use of the weather as a constant presence is also excellent.

Ngaio Marsh’s Dead Water, 1963, is a grim story about the exploitation of a local beauty spot, and the conflict between those who want to preserve its beauty, and those who’re willing to sacrifice it for money.  The plot has a startling resolution, and those who journey to Cornwall can see the impact of tourism on once beautiful settings, as well as read about it in Dead Water.

The plot of Thomas Graham’s Malice in Cornwall, 1998, is gruesome, but the setting is cheerful and bright.  A gloomy and forbidding setting might have been expected, but skillful writers sometimes use this type of contrast for its shock value.  It works well in this book.

For the course on setting, I read many books and sections of books on the subject.  The most startling idea came from Elizabeth George:

One piece of advice, that neophyte writers are always given is ‘write about your own backyard’.  Loosely translated, this means to write about an environment with which you are familiar.  Broadly translated, it means to write what you know.  To this I say balderdash.  If I had believed that, I’d have spent years attempting to write about Huntington Beach, California, a place that could not interest me less as a setting.

George writes in detail about the meticulous research that make her English settings so authentic.  For those who want to go far afield to find settings for their books, George’s description of her approach is immensely valuable.  (See George’s Writing Away, 2004).